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Torchwood: Scars (Fanfiction)

Scars

Word Count: ~ 400
Summary: Strong, capable, unshakable Jack … was breaking.
Characters: Rhys Williams, Gwen Cooper, Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones
Pairing: Gwen/Rhys, Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG
Spoiler: Exit Wounds
Setting: after Exit Wounds
Warnings: Mention of canon character deaths
Author's Note: Written for torchwood_las. The prompt was In The Dark and the additional element to use was Music. I got some positive and negative votes on this one and that pretty much shows what I think about this story as well. I loved it when it had the original length, but after cutting it to match the word count, I didn't like it that much anymore. :) I'm posting it for the sake of having a full set of all my stories. I'll do better next prompt ...
Disclaimer: I’m not making money with this fanfic. The tv-show Torchwood and the characters appearing within it belong to their producers and creators. Any similarities to living or dead persons are purely coincidental and not intended.

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Rhys had never expected that it would happen here. Bombs, explosions, death and terror. And his wife in the middle of it. Miraculously still alive. Lying next to him in their bed. He listened to her breathing while, outside, sirens of police cars mingled, becoming the soundtrack of the aftermath. The worst was over but even now, scavengers roamed the streets and robbed shops and homes.

Gwen sighed loudly and in the weak lights coming from outside, Rhys saw that her eyes were open.

“Alright?“ he asked and then he gave himself a mental slap. “I mean-“

“I know what you mean. I'm okay.“ Considering that Owen and Tosh were dead. She touched his cheek. “I'll go check on the guys.“ With that, she left their bed.

Rhys closed his eyes and waited. It shouldn't take her too long to sneak to the living room and see if Jack and Ianto, sleeping on the sofa bed, were alright. Gwen had brought them along with her when she'd come home for a break, stating that she couldn't leave them at the Hub with all the ghosts. Ianto's place was destroyed – one of the bombs had hit it. Rhys had spent the evening watching them, seeing Gwen cling to the remains of her team and even Ianto, normally so detached, had been unusually tactile. But Jack … he'd been strangely restrained, spending the evening staring out the window, alone by choice.

Rhys sighed and, getting impatient, he followed Gwen. He found her lingering at the door to the living room and was just about to ask her what was wrong when he heard it: sobbing. He followed her eyes.

In the weak lights of the street lamps bleeding through the windows, Jack was crying in Ianto's arms. Strong, capable, unshakable Jack … was breaking.

Ianto's head turned in their direction. He didn't say anything, though, accepting their presence in Jack's name. And then Gwen moved, joining the embrace. Standing there alone, the loss really hit Rhys. He would never again keep Tosh company while she fixed his laptop. He would never again share jokes with Owen while nursing a beer in a pub. Nights out with the team would never again be the six of them. And it hurt.

It was Jack who reached out a trembling hand to him.

And Rhys took what was offered.


END
05/12


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Comments

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firesnap
May. 18th, 2012 02:40 pm (UTC)
This story got my +1 vote. I'm a sucker for Rhys POV, especially Post-Exit Wounds, because he has such an intimate but still outside look at the rest of the team. Gwen and Rhys lying in bed listening to sirens was such a wonderful image. Then Jack's breakdown, and Gwen and Ianto supporting him, made me melt.

Not to mention, Jack reaching his hand out to Rhys was such a great way to sort of put-to-bed a lot of their "rivalry."

It was a lot to accomplish in 400 words.
jolinarjackson
May. 19th, 2012 04:02 am (UTC)
Thank you for the +1 vote and this review. :)

I love Rhys POV as well, especially in relation to the team. I think that, after Meat, he got much closer to all of them.
larsinger29
May. 18th, 2012 02:58 pm (UTC)
Well, I for one enjoyed this. I think you did a lovely job capturing the somber mood following "Exit Wounds". I like, too, that it was through Rhys' eyes that we experienced this. The dawning realization of just what happened and how it was going to impact them all was impacting. And the ending, with Jack holding out his hand to Rhys, really cemented that Rhys is very much a part of this strange little team. Not in the traditional sense, but in some way that just fits.

Nice job here, my dear. Like I said, I enjoyed it. :o)
jolinarjackson
May. 19th, 2012 04:05 am (UTC)
Thank you! :)

Rhys is part of the team. I really see him that way. Especially in the novels and audios after Exit Wounds ... he's just always around and sometimes even involved and his POV is so wonderful.
nancybrown
May. 18th, 2012 08:50 pm (UTC)
I like what you did with the prompt here, good use of the POV, nice coda to the episode.
jolinarjackson
May. 19th, 2012 04:05 am (UTC)
Thanks. :)
ldarkfire
May. 18th, 2012 10:23 pm (UTC)
I'm going to cry. You always manage to put so much emotion.

T_T
jolinarjackson
May. 19th, 2012 04:06 am (UTC)
Thank you. :)
kfirah
May. 19th, 2012 12:07 am (UTC)
Heartbreaking. Great POV, so intimate and touching. Loved it.
jolinarjackson
May. 19th, 2012 04:06 am (UTC)
Thanks. :)
withywindle01
May. 19th, 2012 01:06 pm (UTC)
Oh, you broke my heart!!!
jolinarjackson
May. 19th, 2012 02:54 pm (UTC)
Oops ... sorry. :)
jo02
May. 19th, 2012 04:55 pm (UTC)

I didn't vote in this round, which was a shame, because this so would have got my +1 vote. (Yes, I've read them all now and definitely liked this one the best)
jolinarjackson
May. 20th, 2012 06:43 am (UTC)
Thank you. :)
sammydragoncat
May. 21st, 2012 01:38 pm (UTC)
I think you captured the tone to that episode. Great job
jolinarjackson
May. 22nd, 2012 05:46 am (UTC)
Thank you. :)
lilferret
May. 21st, 2012 06:09 pm (UTC)
Broke my heart.
jolinarjackson
May. 22nd, 2012 05:46 am (UTC)
Aw ... thanks. :)
hab318princess
Jun. 13th, 2012 04:19 pm (UTC)
so sad, lovely story
jolinarjackson
Jun. 14th, 2012 07:30 am (UTC)
Thanks. :)
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